The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

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of

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entering an unidentified

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during opening hours in the United Kingdom between two different seasons: summer and winter, in 2003.

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, it can be clearly observed that the

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of tourists visiting

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museum

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in summer was the highest,

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in winter was incredibly lowest throughout a given timeframe.

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about 1,500

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reached

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at noon right

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3 hours ago was the highest

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of tourists among other

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time

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of the day. Around 16 p.

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of

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visitors

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gradually dropped

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around 800

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.

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constantly

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its customers shortly before the closing

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. In regards with, the

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seems to close earlier than its actual closing

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as the tourists all vanished at the

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of 15 p.

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the

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clients during the 9-11 a.

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. rose to almost 600

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before slightly

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to around 400

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, after 12 p.

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start to

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down

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at a constant rate until the mentioned

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