The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.
The line graph compares the average
number
of visitors
entering an unidentified museum
during opening hours in the United Kingdom between two different seasons: summer and winter, in 2003.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the number
of tourists visiting museum
in summer was the highest, Add an article
the museum
a museum
whereas
that of
in winter was incredibly lowest throughout a given timeframe.
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To begin
with, in summer, at
about 1,500 Change preposition
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visitors
reached its
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their
peaked
at noon right Replace the word
peak
afterthe
opening of the Correct your spelling
after the
museum
3 hours ago was the highest number
of tourists among other time
of the day. Around 16 p.Fix the agreement mistake
times
m
., the number
of museum
visitors
gradually dropped at
around 800 Change preposition
to
peoples
. Fix the agreement mistake
people
Then
, the museum
constantly loss
its customers shortly before the closing Replace the word
lost
time
.
In regards with, the museum
seems to close earlier than its actual closing time
as the tourists all vanished at the time
of 15 p.m
..
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.
...
Although
there are some fluctuation
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fluctuations
of
the Change preposition
in
number
of the
clients during the 9-11 a.Correct article usage
apply
m
. rose to almost 600 peoples
before slightly Fix the agreement mistake
people
decrease
to around 400 Wrong verb form
decreasing
peoples
. Fix the agreement mistake
people
However
, after 12 p.m
. the number
of visitors
start to fell
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fall
down
at a constant rate until the mentioned Change preposition
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time
come
.Wrong verb form
came
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