Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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many believe that the manufacturers and supermarkets are the

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responsible for reducing the

amount

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of packaging goods, others argue that

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customers should avoid buying

those kind

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of

products

instead

. Both

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of

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and the reason why I agree with the former statement will be elaborated on in

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essay.

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with, it may

seems

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sensible for some to believe that the suppliers need to take action for the

product

's packaging reduction scheme.

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is

possibly

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because they view that they already have the team that

design

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the packaging which easier for them to invent

the

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fewer wraps of the goods. Take toys,

for example

: some toys had

unnescessary

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unnecessary

wrap

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for

smalls pack

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of its components that later will ensemble it together. Many

opponent

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of

this

idea might oppose that we should manage

this

on our own. In

this

respect,

this

might be because there are some people who prefer to buy a

product

with extra layers of packaging for some reasons which is more subjective

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each

individuals

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.

For instance

, some fashion

products

like bags or

glassess

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glasses

, they often packed with

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and nonsensical warp of

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goods.

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is the reason why believe that people should

responsible

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for

there

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their

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purchase

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.

However

, I personally argue in favour of the manufacturers' side seeing that it is almost impossible to avoid

such

items. To simply explain, it is difficult for us as a customer to know which

products

contained

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several layers of wrap in which

a vital information

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vital information

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to choose

those

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that product

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product

.

Moreover

, letting the customers

to

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do

mentioned

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activities is

considering

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as throwing a burden

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the customer rather than resolving it. In conclusion,

although

it is undeniable that customers should take care of their own, the

manufacterers

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manufacturers

are indeed playing

such

a major role in terms of

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less packaging

product

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products

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in order to create

a better

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better products

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products

.