The bar chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
this
report derives from a bar chart which illustrates the total time
men
and women
spend performing six different chores around the house during the day.
overall
, the males prefer gardening over any other task and dislike performimg
clothes washing more than any other task. Not only is Correct your spelling
performing
this
point clear, but also
women
utilize
the most Verb problem
spend
time
for
cooking, Change preposition
apply
while
maintenance is a job they spend the least amount of time
acting on.
Notably, women
more than double the men
in cooking with a 44 minute
difference between Add a hyphen
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sexes
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the sexes
Additionally
, observe how women
execute the cleaning for about 45 minutes
more than the
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men
. Next with gardening, the men
perform this
for 49.5 minutes
, and the women
conduct this
activity for less than half that time
.
with the care of children, women
far exceed the men
in this
area by 25 minutes
each day. Besides
this
point, the
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men
undertake maintenance almost three times more than women
. on
a final note of comparison, the famels spend 25 Capitalize word
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minutes
per day washing clothes, while
men
only use 2 minutes
of thier
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their
time
on this
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