The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present.
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The infographic illustrates the changes of a village by the seaside from 1995 to the present day. From an observational perspective, it can be recognised that the village has undergone a visible transition to include the residences, leisure amenities and places to dine.
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, the café, hotel, and the majority of houses have remained untouched. Beginning with the eastern half of the centre, as far as farmland and forest park were concerned, they have been cut down and replaced with
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golf course and tennis courts. With respect to the hotel in the south-east, a new car park has been built adjacently. Moving onto the western part of the suburb where the most noticeable change is that the fishing port has been demolished. Regarding the fish market and shops in the
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, they have been converted into apartments and restaurants, respectively. In the north-west, there are now more houses with an extension to the road.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • evolution
  • seaside village
  • infrastructure
  • housing estates
  • commercialization
  • amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • demographics
  • sustainability
  • preservation
  • urbanization
  • tourism
  • accessibility
  • conservation
  • gentrification
  • land use
  • residential areas
  • urban planning
  • ecological footprint
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