The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present.

The infographic illustrates the changes of a village by the seaside from 1995 to the present day. From an observational perspective, it can be recognised that the village has undergone a visible transition to include the residences, leisure amenities and places to dine.

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, the café, hotel, and the majority of houses have remained untouched. Beginning with the eastern half of the centre, as far as farmland and forest park were concerned, they have been cut down and replaced with

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golf course and tennis courts. With respect to the hotel in the south-east, a new car park has been built adjacently. Moving onto the western part of the suburb where the most noticeable change is that the fishing port has been demolished. Regarding the fish market and shops in the

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, they have been converted into apartments and restaurants, respectively. In the north-west, there are now more houses with an extension to the road.

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transformation
evolution
seaside village
infrastructure
housing estates
commercialization
amenities
recreational facilities
demographics
sustainability
preservation
urbanization
tourism
accessibility
conservation
gentrification
land use
residential areas
urban planning
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Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.