The line chart displays the cities population proportion in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, along with the projections for 2030 and 2040.

The line chart displays the cities population proportion in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, along with the projections for 2030 and 2040.
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The line chart displays the proportion of people who lived in cities in the
Philippines
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,
Malaysia
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, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020,
along with
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the projections for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, all the nations experienced an upward trend, and
this
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trend will continue in the next 20 years. Another significant feature is that
Malaysia
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is projected to be the country with the highest percentage in 2040.
Malaysia
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started at 30%, slightly lower than the
Philippines
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, before continuing to rise to around 45% in 1990. From
this
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point onwards, it gradually grew over the period and peaked at around 75% in 2020 and will be 90% in 2040. The
Philippines
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witnessed a 20% increase in 1990. It
then
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moderately declined by approximately 10% in the next ten years and was surpassed by
Malaysia
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before starting to climb again in the next period and will continue until 2040. Thailand stood at just below 20% at the beginning of the period and had a noticeable increase to around 30% in 1990 and remained stable until 2020. It is predicted to soar considerably to almost half in the next 20 years.
On the other hand
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, Indonesia started at 15% and consistently moved upward and had a peak in 2020 at around 50%, overtaking the
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and Thailand. In 2040, more than half the population of Indonesia is predicted to live in cities.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 93%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, malaysia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "displays" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population proportion
  • line chart
  • historical trends
  • projections
  • urbanization
  • economic impact
  • infrastructure
  • social services
  • compare and contrast
  • general trends
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