The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)

The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. (Figures are based on the minimum daily requirement per peron of 11.5 litres.)
The table shows data about the cost of the minimum daily
water
needs and compares the average percentage of the daily
wage
in
Tanzania
, Uganda, Pakistan, the US, and the UK. It can be clearly seen from the table that the people in
Tanzania
and Uganda used the highest amount of
water
per day and the figures for the daily cost per person were significant for them,
while
those of the US and the UK were negligible.
Tanzania
and Uganda had substantial figures for daily
water
expenditure at 6.4 and 4.1 cents respectively.
By contrast
, the daily spending figures for
water
in the United Kingdom and the United States were slight. Pakistan’s people consumed
water
moderately and paid just 1.76 cents. The proportion of the daily
wage
for Americans and Britain was the lowest at 0.006% and 0.013% respectively,
whereas
the
most
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amount of daily
wage
was related to
Tanzania
. Uganda’s people were the second highest consumers of
water
and
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the
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daily
wage
for
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them
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was 3.2%. The daily
wage
figure in Pakistan was 1.1%,
in
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which ranked third among other countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, wage, tanzania with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • daily cost
  • per person
  • minimum daily requirement
  • litres
  • comparison
  • assessment
  • analysis
  • evaluation
  • impact
  • citizens
  • relationship
  • availability
  • resources
  • measures
  • manage
  • implications
  • health
  • hygiene
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