The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2005 & 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graph below demonstrates information about the percentage of items sold individually in the period between 2005 and 2010 in Canada.
One of the biggest sales made in both compared years was in electronics and appliances, with less than 30%,
while
the fewest trades were in furniture for the home, with only 40% in summarization.
In 2005, people had more need for electronic equipment and other appliances rather than consumable products, which took 22% of sales overall
; furniture, with a rate that reached 25%; and, eventually, mobile or computer games—only 18% out of 100%. In 5 years, these numbers slightly alter, but not more than 5% minimum and up to 10% maximum. For example
, the percentage of the retail sales for foods or beverages and home furnishings reached the maximum amount of changes, and other sectors - the minimum one.Submitted by nejla.abdullayeva on
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