The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. (the piano was over 10% in 2005, over 20% in 2010, about 35% in 2015; the guitar was over 10% in 2005, about 18% in 2010, 40% in 2015; the drums was about 5% in 1005, about 4% in 2010, about 10% in 2015; the violin was 10% in 2005, 9% in 2010, 5% in 2015)

The bar chart illustrates the percentages of children in school learning to play different

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instrument

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in 2005, 2010 and 2015.

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, it can be seen that in 2005 and 2010 the highest percentage

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piano,

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drums accounted for the lowest proportion.

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, there

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a significant increase in piano and guitar in 2015. The

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of children who play guitar and piano

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at just over 10% in 2005.

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rose steadily to almost 20% in 2010, before

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a peak of up

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40% in 2015.

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drums and violin stay less than 10% in 2005, 2010 and 2015. In terms of children who learn violin, the rate slowly

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in the three years ( about 9%, 7% and 5% respectively ). For those who

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drums

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percentage in the first two years, which is around 5%, and

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slightly

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to 9% in 2015.