The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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salary
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UK in various cities.
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Overall
, there is a fluctuation in the income in given seven cities in Britain.
Looking into details, the wealthiest people are living in London which is the most populated town in UK
and the average Correct article usage
the UK
salary
of individuals is recorded as 33,634 pounds. Even though, Cambridge city has the least number of occupants their income is still in the second position just under 30,000 pounds.
It is interesting to note that, the mean salary
is almost closer in Bristol and Edinburgh although
they are in different countries. In addition
, citizens with the least amount of money, which is exactly 25531 pounds, are living in Birmingham in United
Kingdom. Correct article usage
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Manchester is quite high Correct article usage
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4643, their Change preposition
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