The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The pie graph illustrates the proportion of used
water
in three different sectors and the bar chart presents the fraction of
water
used in four countries in the year 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
most
water
in the world is used for cultivation.
Moreover
, India uses
water
in the
agriculture
sector
while
Canada applies for the
industry
sector.
To begin
with, in 2000,
agriculture
occupied 70% of world
water
use followed by
industry
with 22%. Domestic registered at under 10%.
Additionally
, India in 2000 used
water
for cultivation 92% and both Indian domestic and
industry
accounted for 5% and 3% respectively.
On the contrary
,
industry
in Canada was at four-fifths and the total of both
agriculture
and domestic was about 20%.
Besides
, In New Zealand, the agricultural and domestic sectors were almost the same number, which were at 44% and 46%. and the rest 10% was for
industry
.
Furthermore
, China
use
Change the verb form
uses
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water
for the
agriculture
sector 69%,
industry
22% and domestic 9%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, agriculture, industry with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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