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The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
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The pie graph illustrates the proportion of used
water
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 in three different sectors and the bar chart presents the fraction of
water
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 used in four countries in the year 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 most
water
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 in the world is used for cultivation.
Moreover
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, India uses
water
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 in the
agriculture
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 sector
while
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 Canada applies for the
industry
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 sector.
To begin
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 with, in 2000,
agriculture
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 occupied 70% of world
water
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 use followed by
industry
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 with 22%. Domestic registered at under 10%.
Additionally
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, India in 2000 used
water
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 for cultivation 92% and both Indian domestic and
industry
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 accounted for 5% and 3% respectively.
On the contrary
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,
industry
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 in Canada was at four-fifths and the total of both
agriculture
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 and domestic was about 20%.
Besides
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, In New Zealand, the agricultural and domestic sectors were almost the same number, which were at 44% and 46%. and the rest 10% was for
industry
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.
Furthermore
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, China
use
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water
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 for the
agriculture
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 sector 69%,
industry
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 22% and domestic 9%.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, agriculture, industry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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