The bar chart shows the proportion of people aged over 65 years old in Germany, Canada, and the UK over a period of 50 years.

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population

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aged above 65 years old in the countries

Germany

, Canada and the

UK

above

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over

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a period of 50 years.

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illustrated

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three different time periods and it is

a

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clear that the highest number of people aged 65

it

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was

Germany

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population. At

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first glance , in 1980 the

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rates

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was

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and made up 15 per cent

then

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the

Uk

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accounted for under 15 % and the lower

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in

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during

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this

period was

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and

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made up

ten

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10

percentage

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. In 2000, the trend

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in Germany

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was increasing

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to reach

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twenty

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,

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figure's and

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Canada figure's

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the same level to reach fifteen

per cen

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per cent

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last

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period ,

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reached a peak proportion of

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to

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made up 25,

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Canada to showed 20

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and the lower rate of

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aged 65 was the

UK

.