The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.

The pie graphs provide information about the number of employment among both

sexs

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sexes

in the United Kingdom in the years

of

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1988 and 2012.

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,

it is clear that

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men

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worked full-time dominated the charts

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whole period.

meanwhile

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males

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male

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part-time

worker

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workers

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consider had

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the lowest

persentage

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percentage

and remained slightly the same.

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, numerous of females who choose to

worked

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full-time over part-time increased

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throughout

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throughout

the years,

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to what is shown, men with full-time jobs had the highest ratio, by nearly 53% and 47% respectively, in 1988 and 2012,

whereas

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men with part-time jobs had the low rate, about 6% and 7% respectively,

moreover

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did not show any major change and stayed stable till the end of the period. In

term

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of women, by the year

1988

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1988,

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most females working force were at part-time jobs almost 22%

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femals

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females

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with full-time only 19%. After 20 years more women

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toward full-time work by roughly 26%,

on the other hand

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, the number of part-time workers had minor

decresed

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decreased

to 20%.