The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
As one can see
at
the chart, Change preposition
in
this
is about air
pollution source
Fix the agreement mistake
sources
causes
by transport, industry, households, and total Wrong verb form
caused
air
pollutants since
1990 to 2005.
Change preposition
from
In
1990 to 1993, the Change preposition
From
pollutions
from transportation and households Fix the agreement mistake
pollution
are
similar amount. And it Wrong verb form
was
stay
Wrong verb form
stayed
stilled
until 2005.
Meanwhile, the number of Replace the word
still
pollutions
from industry and totalFix the agreement mistake
pollution
of
Change preposition
apply
pollutions
was risingFix the agreement mistake
pollution
up
. Change preposition
apply
Despite
, it Correct pronoun usage
Despite this
keep
decreasing Change the verb form
keeps
since
1993 to 2005.
Change preposition
from
In addition
, the chart shows that in
1999 til 2002, Change preposition
from
total
of Correct article usage
the total
air
pollutants was almost equal. Same as industry from 2002-2005
To sumerise
, the quantity of Correct your spelling
summarise
air
pollutions
that happenedFix the agreement mistake
pollution
from
Change preposition
for
Correct your spelling
several
severous
reasons, was lower from
every previous Correct your spelling
severe
years
.Change to a singular noun
year
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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