The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The presented bar chart depicts the shifts in the rate of Australian citizens who grew up in or outside of the city,and rural areas in the time period of 1995 and 2010.
As an
overall
trend, it is crystal clear that the total percentage of individuals who were born internally and externally, Linking Words
the
Australian cities was high in both 1995 and 2010 ,Change preposition
in the
whereas
the lowest percentage goes for the people who live in towns and suburbs.
To commence , in 1995 the most populated areas were out of the cities which Linking Words
was60
and 80 %in 2010,the second place was inner cities over 40 in 1995 and above 60 in 2010.Correct your spelling
was 60
Furthermore
, the population of towns where less than in rural regions in 1995 which was 40 and under 40 for rural and 20 %,just under 20 for towns.
In sharp contrast , the average rate of people who were born inside the town and in rustical parts was the same, just under 20 %,Linking Words
hence
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this
was significantly under 20 for Linking Words
urbans
and considerably Correct your spelling
urban
under20
for rustic residential sectors.Correct your spelling
under 20
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