The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the plan view of the
city
of Wesley in 1815 and at the present moment.
Overall
, the town has been changed a lot by introducing new transportation methods
as well as
due to
industrialization. Looking into details, a railway track has been laid over the Twin tall bridge connecting the Northwest and southwest areas of the
city
. The housing scheme in 1815 was completely converted into a business and residential area
although
the town hall and market square are still there. The church has been completely demolished and a new shopping centre has been constructed. Another noticeable change is that, now there are neither fields nor Lenton woods left, even though the lake Lenton is there.
Additionally
, a hotel and a bar have been built in the Northern area of the
city
replacing Lord Wesley's houses and
this
will increase tourism around the
city
Submitted by wm.asanka.sandaruwan on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
What to do next:
Look at other essays: