The bar chart shows the proportion of people aged over 65 years old in Germany, Canada, and the UK over a period of 50 years.

The bar chart shows the proportion of people aged over 65 years old in Germany,

Canada, and the UK over a period of 50 years.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of elderly people of 65 or over in three different countries from 1980 to 2030.
Overall
,
Germany
has the majority of elder citizens.
While
in parallel, other states are still ambiguous, in 1980 UK outweighed
Canada
.
Whereas
, 50 years later the result has shifted. To commence with, it is clear from the chart that in 1980
Germany
was the country where a large scale population of older people constituted 15% and the British stood second was approximately 14%.
Although
Canadian was 10%. Probing
further
, in the initial 20s
Germany
was in the same position at 20%. Meanwhile,
Canada
together with
the UK showed a similar ratio was 15%. In the year 2030, the total population of all the countries ascended drastically, as
Germany
recorded 25% and in other realms,
Canada
was about 23% of elder people and the United Kingdom accounted for lowest than
Canada
which was around 19%.
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