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the line graph show the amount of shop closures and openings in a particular nation from 2011 to 2018.

the line graph show the amount of shop closures and openings in a particular nation from 2011 to 2018.
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The line graph illustrates the trend of shop
closures
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 and
openings
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 in a specific nation from 2011 to 2018. Upon examination, it becomes apparent that both
closures
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 and
openings
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 followed a declining trajectory over the given period. Notably, the number of closed shops consistently surpassed the number of
openings
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, with the exception of 2011 and 2015. Regarding shop
closures
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, there was a peak in 2013, reaching approximately 7,100
closures
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, following an upward trend from around 6,500 in 2011.
However
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, a notable decrease occurred in the subsequent years, plummeting to just over 600
closures
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 in 2015 before gradually rising to around 5,100
closures
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 by the end of the period.
Conversely
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, the data on shop
openings
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 began with nearly 8,500 in 2011 but experienced a steady decline to approximately 4,000 in 2012.
However
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, there was an upturn in 2014, with
openings
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 increasing to 6,200, followed by a subsequent decrease to 3,000 by the conclusion of the timeframe. 2 / 2
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words closures, openings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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