The bar chart shows the proportion of people aged over 65 years old in Germany, Canada, and the UK over a period of 50 years.

The bar chart illustrates the number of people who are 65

years

old or over

lived

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in three countries (

Canada

, Germany,

The

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and The

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UK

) from 1980 to 2000 and the projection for 2030. Units are measured in percentage.

Overall

, it can clearly be seen that the total population aged 65 or over increased throughout the given period.

Moreover

, it is predicted that the number will rise in the next 30

years

.

In addition

, Germany was the top country

which

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in which

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people aged 65 or over lived

in

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, compared with

Canada

and The

UK

. In terms of the country which

have

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the biggest population with 65 or over, Germany started at exactly 15 in 1980.

Thereafter

, the number drastically

increase

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increased

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to 20 in the next 20

years

. In 2030, the percentage will grow by around 5. Regarding the other two countries,

Canada

and The

UK

stood at precisely 10 and approximately 14, respectively. In the next following

years

, the proportion of

Canada

went up to 15 and the old people of The

UK

witnessed a slight growth to 15. In 2030, the sum of the old generation

lived

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in

Canada

and The

UK

will hit it is highest level at just above 20 for

Canada

and at nearly 20 for the

UK

.