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The line graph shows 5-year number of fish and meat consumption and grams per person per week between 1979 and 2004.

The line graph shows 5-year number of fish and meat consumption and grams per person per week between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph shows
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the 5-year
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 number of
fish
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 and
meat
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 consumption and
grams
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 per
person
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 per week between 1979 and 2004. From 1979
grams
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 of chicken per
person
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 started
150
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at 150
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 and it reached 250
grams
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 in 2004 with both decreasing and increasing fluctuation. There was both an increase and a decrease in
grams
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 of beef and lamb per
person
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 per week, in 2004 the number was lower than the initial result.
İn
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In
 detail,
fish
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 weekly
grams
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 per
person
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 started
with
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at
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 50
grams
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, until 2004, it gradually decreased and
finally
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 fell below 50. İn lamb
meat
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, it decreased to 50
grams
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 with a steadily increasing and decreasing fluctuation. Compared to other types of
meat
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, beef, which started with a high gram, increased until 1989 and reached about 250
grams
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. In the following years, it both increased and decreased
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 and in 2004, it decreased to 100
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.
finally
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, chicken
meat
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, unlike the others, increased slightly and reached its peak in 2004.
To sum up
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,
according to
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 the annual graph, people preferred
meat
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 the most weekly.
Although
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fish
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 is a healthier food than chicken, the choice of
fish
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 was the least

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, meat, grams, person with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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