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The line graph shows 5-year number of fish and meat consumption and grams per person per week between 1979 and 2004.

The line graph shows 5-year number of fish and meat consumption and grams per person per week between 1979 and 2004.
#line #-year #fish #meat #consumption #grams #person #week
The line graph shows
5-year
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the 5-year
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 number of
fish
 and
meat
 consumption and
grams
 per
person
 per week between 1979 and 2004. From 1979
grams
 of chicken per
person
 started
150
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at 150
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 and it reached 250
grams
 in 2004 with both decreasing and increasing fluctuation. There was both an increase and a decrease in
grams
 of beef and lamb per
person
 per week, in 2004 the number was lower than the initial result.
İn
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In
 detail,
fish
 weekly
grams
 per
person
 started
with
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at
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 50
grams
, until 2004, it gradually decreased and
finally
 fell below 50. İn lamb
meat
, it decreased to 50
grams
 with a steadily increasing and decreasing fluctuation. Compared to other types of
meat
, beef, which started with a high gram, increased until 1989 and reached about 250
grams
. In the following years, it both increased and decreased
,
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 and in 2004, it decreased to 100
grams
.
finally
, chicken
meat
, unlike the others, increased slightly and reached its peak in 2004.
To sum up
,
according to
 the annual graph, people preferred
meat
 the most weekly.
Although
fish
 is a healthier food than chicken, the choice of
fish
 was the least
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