The pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of canada and australia.

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The pie charts provided illustrate

proportion

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the proportion

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of marital status of

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the Canadien

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Canadien

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Canadian

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and Australian

population

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populations

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, it can be seen that the majority of Canadiens and Australians separated but not

offically

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officially

divorced.

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the percentage of divorce was the lowest in Canada and Australia (1% and 2%

repectively

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respectively

Same gender

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marriage was only found among Canadiens. In terms of

Canada

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Canada's

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population

martial

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marital

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status, the highest percentage was

seprated

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separated

but not divorced 53%. The second highest was married

couples

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which was 29%.

On the other hand

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, never married and

widowes

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widowed

widowers

widows

share the same proportion 7%.

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, The lowest was same gender

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marriage

marrige

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marriage

and

divored

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divorced

couples

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(3% and 1% respectively) With

regared

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regard

regards

to Australia's population, the number

married

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of married

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couples

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was higher compared to separated (46% and 41% respectively). Widowed was only higher by one

percent

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with

compare

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compared

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to single. Divorced

couples

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where

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were

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only 2%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words couples with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

141 words

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The pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of canada and australia.

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Some people say that the Internet is bringing people together by making the world smaller. Do you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

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