The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate how three
damage
nutrients in case of excessive consumption have the ratios in daily meals.
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damaged
Overall
, sodium
and saturated fat have their biggest shares in dinner
, but snacks
are the meal type which has the most added sugar
. Breakfast
has the lowest rates of saturated fat and added sugar
, while
it is one of the lowest meal types that has sodium
.
The largest share belongs to dinner
, with 43%, while
breakfast
and snacks
share the same percentage, 16%. Lunch
has twice the sodium
of breakfast
and snacks
.
Dinner
has the largest share in terms of having saturated fat, as well as
sodium
. The second place for consisting of sodium
is owned by lunch
with 26%. Snacks
and breakfast
are 5% and 10% less than lunch
.
In contrast
sodium
and saturated fat are the most used nutritions
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nutrients
dinner
, added sugar
, which is another unhealthy, accounts for 42% of snacks
with the highest ratio. It comprises almost a quarter of dinner
. Breakfast
has the lowest percentage of added sugar
, coming after lunch
which has 19%.Submitted by smd1212 on
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