The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate how three
damage
nutrients in case of excessive consumption have the ratios in daily meals.
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Overall
, Linking Words
sodium
and saturated fat have their biggest shares in Use synonyms
dinner
, but Use synonyms
snacks
are the meal type which has the most added Use synonyms
sugar
. Use synonyms
Breakfast
has the lowest rates of saturated fat and added Use synonyms
sugar
, Use synonyms
while
it is one of the lowest meal types that has Linking Words
sodium
.
The largest share belongs to Use synonyms
dinner
, with 43%, Use synonyms
while
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breakfast
and Use synonyms
snacks
share the same percentage, 16%. Use synonyms
Lunch
has twice the Use synonyms
sodium
of Use synonyms
breakfast
and Use synonyms
snacks
.
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Dinner
has the largest share in terms of having saturated fat, Use synonyms
as well as
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sodium
. The second place for consisting of Use synonyms
sodium
is owned by Use synonyms
lunch
with 26%. Use synonyms
Snacks
and Use synonyms
breakfast
are 5% and 10% less than Use synonyms
lunch
.
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In contrast
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sodium
and saturated fat are the most used Use synonyms
nutritions
in Replace the word
nutrients
dinner
, added Use synonyms
sugar
, which is another unhealthy, accounts for 42% of Use synonyms
snacks
with the highest ratio. It comprises almost a quarter of Use synonyms
dinner
. Use synonyms
Breakfast
has the lowest percentage of added Use synonyms
sugar
, coming after Use synonyms
lunch
which has 19%.Use synonyms
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