The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate how three
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nutrients in case of excessive consumption have the ratios in daily meals.
Overall
,
sodium
and saturated fat have their biggest shares in
dinner
, but
snacks
are the meal type which has the most added
sugar
.
Breakfast
has the lowest rates of saturated fat and added
sugar
,
while
it is one of the lowest meal types that has
sodium
. The largest share belongs to
dinner
, with 43%,
while
breakfast
and
snacks
share the same percentage, 16%.
Lunch
has twice the
sodium
of
breakfast
and
snacks
.
Dinner
has the largest share in terms of having saturated fat,
as well as
sodium
. The second place for consisting of
sodium
is owned by
lunch
with 26%.
Snacks
and
breakfast
are 5% and 10% less than
lunch
.
In contrast
sodium
and saturated fat are the most used
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in
dinner
, added
sugar
, which is another unhealthy, accounts for 42% of
snacks
with the highest ratio. It comprises almost a quarter of
dinner
.
Breakfast
has the lowest percentage of added
sugar
, coming after
lunch
which has 19%.
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  • comparison
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