The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph represents the way that

the

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foreign

travelers

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travellers

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spent their money in England between 1980 to 2010

while

the pie chart illustrates why they

visit

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visited

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there in 1980 and 2010.

Overall

, there was a fluctuation in the foreign

capitals

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capital

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earned by the UK over the given three decades and the main reason for these visits was to

spent

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their vacations. Looking into details, received overseas money

was

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started

around

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at around

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8000 dollar

million

and significantly

deceased

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decreased

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by 1000

million

dollars within the same year,

Following

this

there was a rapid increase in profits reaching a peak at 12000

million

dollars in

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early 1995. There was a rapid decline in earnings in

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1993 falling closer to $9500

million

before reaching

to

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$10500

millions

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in 2010. The top 3 purposes for these arrivals in

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2010 were spending holidays, business

works

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work

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and meeting

friend

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friends

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and relatives and each of the percentages

are

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44.1, 20.7 and 18.7 respectively. But in 2010 visiting relatives was replaced by business reasons

in

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which

increase

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an increase

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was

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recorded

about

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by about

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10 % compared with 1980.

Althogh

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Although

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vacation

visiting

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visits

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remained 1st

palce

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place

in 2010

its

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proportion decreased by 5 per cent.