The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures illustrate the amount of money which was spent by a
school
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in
UK
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the UK

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annually in a
three decades
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three-decade

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period from 1981 to 2001.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the biggest
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shares
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share

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of
spenditure
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expenditure

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of the
school
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was
for
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on

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teachers's
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teachers'

The word 's is not the correct form for the plural possessive of the noun teachers. Remove the final s.

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wages
while
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the
Insurance
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section
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sector

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had the lowest
shares
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among other categories. First of all, in 1981 the highest amount of money which was spent by
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school
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the school
a school

The noun phrase school seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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, was related
to
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on

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teachers
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teachers'
teacher's

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and staffs salaries, with 40% and 28% respectively and
these two
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this two section
these two sections

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section
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had 68%
shares
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of annual
spenditure
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expenditure

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in total
while
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insurance
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the insurance

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part with a minor
porportion
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proportion

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, about 2% was the lowest.
Furthermore
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, in 1991
salaries
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the salaries

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of
teachers
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and
staffs
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staff

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was
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apply

The verb was appears to be unnecessary here.

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experienced a 4%
increament
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increase in

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totally
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total

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where
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teachers
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teachers'
teacher's

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wages went up about
one
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apply

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ten per cent.
However
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, the
insurance
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saw a minor growth
by
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of

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1%
in contrast
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to
5
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a 5

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%
decreased
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decrease

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in total
shares
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of other resources. Second of all, in 2001
while
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wages
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the wages

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of
school
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proffesors
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professors

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had the biggest share in comparison to other parts with 5% less than half, the furniture and equipment
were
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apply

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experienced a dramatic rise and increased
less
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by less

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than a quarter , from 5% to 23% which took place of staffs salaries
shares
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with only 15%.
Also
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, the
insurance
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section
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got tripled in that year
in contrast
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to
resources
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the resources

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section
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where
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which

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it
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apply

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was about halved with 9% in total.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, shares, teachers, insurance, section with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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