The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures illustrate the amount of money which was spent by a
school
in UK
annually in a Correct article usage
the UK
three decades
period from 1981 to 2001.
Correct your spelling
three-decade
Overall
, it can be seen that the biggest shares
of Fix the agreement mistake
share
spenditure
of the Correct your spelling
expenditure
school
was for
Change preposition
on
teachers's
wages Remove the s
teachers'
while
the Insurance
section
had the lowest Correct your spelling
sector
shares
among other categories.
First of all, in 1981 the highest amount of money which was spent by school
, was related Add an article
the school
a school
to
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on
teachers
and staffs salaries, with 40% and 28% respectively and Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
these two
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this two section
these two sections
section
had 68% shares
of annual spenditure
in total Correct your spelling
expenditure
while
insurance
part with a minor Correct article usage
the insurance
porportion
, about 2% was the lowest. Correct your spelling
proportion
Furthermore
, in 1991 salaries
of Correct article usage
the salaries
teachers
and staffs
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staff
was
experienced a 4% Unnecessary verb
apply
increament
Correct your spelling
increase in
totally
where Change the word
total
teachers
wages went up about Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
one
ten per cent. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
, the insurance
saw a minor growth by
1% Change preposition
of
in contrast
to 5
% Correct article usage
a 5
decreased
in total Change the form of the verb
decrease
shares
of other resources.
Second of all, in 2001 while
wages
of Correct article usage
the wages
school
proffesors
had the biggest share in comparison to other parts with 5% less than half, the furniture and equipment Correct your spelling
professors
were
experienced a dramatic rise and increased Unnecessary verb
apply
less
than a quarter , from 5% to 23% which took place of staffs salaries Change preposition
by less
shares
with only 15%. Also
, the insurance
section
got tripled in that year in contrast
to resources
Correct article usage
the resources
section
where
Correct word choice
which
it
was about halved with 9% in total.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, shares, teachers, insurance, section with synonyms.
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