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The tables show (Table a) the average speed of urban zone traffic (in kilometres per hour or kph) in a number of countries over a fifty-year period, including a future estimate; and also (Table b) the total number of urban zones per country (in thousands).

The tables show (Table a) the average speed of urban zone traffic (in kilometres per hour or kph) in a number of countries over a fifty-year period, including a future estimate; and also (Table b) the total number of urban zones per country (in thousands).
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The first table illustrates changes in the average velocity of city
traffic
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 with a future forecast in the nine different countries over a period of fifty years, and the second table shows the figures for urban zones per country. It can be clearly seen from the table that Canada had the highest speed of urban
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 in 1970,
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, Italy had the lowest. The total number of urban areas was the highest in the United States.
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, Chile and Italy had an equal figure at 1.1 (thousands) and were the lowest during the same period. Between 1970 and 2010, the figure for
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 speed in France increased moderately from 60
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 to 68
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 after which it will decrease to 52
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 in 2020. From 1990 to 2010, the number for velocity of city
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 in Italy saw a significant growth from 38
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 to 56
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 that of Brazil remained stable at 53
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. In 2010, the figure for
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 in the USA was 53
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,
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 that of the UK was 56
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. The numbers for the year 2010 will decline to 43
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 and 47
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 respectively.
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 the urban zones, all countries will experience a substantial increase except Russia, which will fall to 3,200 by 2020.
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