The charts below show that percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart

show

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shows

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the average percentages of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar that people in the USA get

form

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from

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breakfast

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lunch

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dinner

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, and

snacks

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. For sodium,

dinner

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gives the most at 43%.

Lunch

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is 29%,

snacks

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are 14%, and

breakfast

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is the lowest at 14%. For saturated fat,

dinner

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is again the

highet

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highest

with 38%.

Snacks

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give 21%,

lunch

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gives26%, and

breakfast

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is the lowest at 16%. For added sugar,

snacks

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are the biggest source at 42%.

Dinner

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is 23%,

breakfast

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is 16%, and

lunch

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is only 19%.

Overall

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dinner

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has the most sodium and saturated fat, but

snacks

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have much more added sugar than any meal.

Breakfast

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has the smallest percentages for all

thee

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three

show examples

nutrients.

This

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means that

dinner

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and

snacks

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together give

avery

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a very

large part of these unhealthy nutrients every day.

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May 13, 2024

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast, lunch, dinner, snacks with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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134 words

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