Some teachers prefer the group study methods for their students while others prefer the individual learning method. Which one do you prefer? Discuss the benefits of group study and individual learning. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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prefer
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to teach study
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them is better, but other
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prefer to teach their study with
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many
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students
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a
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homework to their children
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ideas with
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clever and who
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knowladge
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knowledge
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teacher
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of time
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teaching one by one their
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all
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, several
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believe that the individual learning
method
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choice
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because
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teachers
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more
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focus
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to teach
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just one
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student
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However
,
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also
can give more advantages,
such
as,
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confidence
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confidence
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my
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opinion,
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teacher
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use
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person,
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also
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when
i
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am studying alone or with my
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without other
students
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was in middle school my
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use
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learning
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groups
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. Despite of
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who
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learn
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with individual
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have some drowbacks like
students
can not
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this
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idea
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sometimes makes
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them nervouse
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nervouse
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nervous
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,
teacher
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teachers
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that use both
of
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methods have
a good
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good benefits
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benefits
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situasion
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situation
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such
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student
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have
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or
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to Olimpiade so
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prefer
with
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learning
individual
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method
because they can more focus. But
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depends
, if a
teacher
learning with a
group
method
the
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they
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usually do in
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class like usually. In conclusion, the issue about
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more prefer about
the
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both methods
have
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a good
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benefits
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. In my opinion
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with
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individual methods
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better.
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