Task 1 The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart below illustrates the percentage of people aged 65 and above in the
USA
, Sweden
and Japan
over the course of 80 years from 1940 to 2020, and it gives a future forecast for 2040.
Overall
, it is evident that in spite of some fluctuations, the proportion in these countries are
witnessed an upward trend. By the end of the Verb problem
has
period
, the allocation of elderly aged 65 and over in Japan
is predicted to become the highest figure among the countries
studies.
Change noun form
country's
countries'
Firstly
, the USA
topped the chart at 9% of its population aged 65 and above in 1940 while
the figure
in Fix the agreement mistake
figures
Sweden
and Japan
were 7% and 9% respectively. The life expectancy in the USA
rose to 15% then
remained a static period
at under 15% for the next four decades. The
similar pattern during the first forty years in Correct article usage
A
Sweden
can be observed. Figure in Sweden
increased by 7% and surpassed its
the Correct pronoun usage
what
USA
accounted for, then
reached at 20%between 2000 and 2020 before being expected to go beyond 25% at the end
of the period
.
On the other hand
, the percentage of population
aged 65 and over in Add an article
the population
Japan
decreased slightly by 2% in two decades started
from 1940. Since 1960, Change the form of the verb
starting
Japan
had experienced a plateau in the next twenty years before reaching a stable increase at
10%. Change preposition
of
Moreover
, the value in Japan
is evaluated to rank first in the chart by experiencing a skyrocket from 10% to 25% at the end
of the period
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, sweden, japan, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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