The bar chart show the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
Provided is the bar chart exhibiting the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
, the graph indicates that people in England and Wales had
gradually shifted to
owned houses during the period. As the chart shows, the percentage of owned
accommodation experienced an increasing trend. A different pattern emerged for the rented
ones, which led to Wrong verb form
have
an
opposite result. Correct article usage
the
Besides
, both types of households had equal
percentages in 1971.
To start with, there was about 22% of owned accommodation in 1918. It had a slight
increase at first,
then
plateaued
for the next twenty years. Replace the word
plateau
Moreover
, owned households
transcended the rented ones in 1981. Experiencing a steadily
rise Change the word
steady
for
10% between 1953
and 1981, it had reached its peak at approximately 70% in the later years.Change preposition
of
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