You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you regarding a feedback survey results which based on recent
meeting that we conducted at your Add an article
the recent
a recent
hotel
.
As a scheduled task, our company has conducted a feedback survey to gather the participant's honest opinions and viewpoints relating to the event and to the meeting atmosphere. Based on the findings, most of the people in the event were happy with the hotel
premisses
and with the surroundings. They have highlighted that the greenery environment of the area was helpful to them to maintain their satisfaction throughout the day.
Correct your spelling
premises
However
, Correct article usage
the majority
majority
of them were dissatisfied with the lunch buffet. They Correct article usage
the majority
were
pointed out the sugar level relating to the dessert items as well. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, food items were not served in hot as they expected.
As an organizer
I can understand there are some unexpected failures Add a comma
organizer,
can
happen when we Correct pronoun usage
that can
managing
an event. I believe if the Wrong verb form
manage
hotel
management can more concentrate towards the food and breverage
section Correct your spelling
beverage
beverages
throughly
by appointing a new team will be a great asset to the Correct your spelling
thoroughly
hotel
in future.
Yours Faithfully,
Sandumi SilvaSubmitted by silvasandumi on
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, more clearly separate the points about participants' likes and dislikes, and use transition words to link ideas smoothly.
task achievement
To improve task response, provide a bit more detail about what specific steps the manager can take to improve the food, such as changing the menu or ensuring better preparation standards.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and respectful.
task achievement
The letter maintains a formal and polite tone throughout, which is suitable for this context.