The charts below show rhe main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount Of support they receivedfrom employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graphs below illustrate the 2 different reasons for which
students
in various age
groups study, namely for career and for interest. It also
shows how much support
they gained from their employers for their education.
Overall
, it is clear that
the highest number of students
are in the age
group
of less than 26 years
, and they contribute to the group
that receives most of the support
from their company. It is also
evident that most number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
students
pursue education for their careers rather than for their interests. Meanwhile, as the age
progresses the amount of support
the office gives for their studies diminishes.
Around 80% of students
below 26 years
study to build a career, for which they are offered 60% support
from their company. Although
those in the age
group
between 26-29 years
and 30-39 years
make up the second and third highest categories of students
who prefer to study for their career with about 70% and 65% of people respectively, people over 49 years
avail the third highest support
of about 45%, while
in those between 26-29 years
get nearly 50% support
. 70% of elderly people above 49 years
continue their education for their interests rather than for their careers. The company offers the least support
to those between 30-39 years
. The interest to pursue studies for those between 40 and 49 years
is almost equal for both categories, with 40% in each group
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