The maps below show the main changes which took place on the town of Seaton between 1950 and 2000
These two diagrams detail the layout of the
town
in Seaton and the development between 1950 and 2000.
Overall
, the most significant change was the area of the race course which it
close to the beach, Correct your spelling
is
had
been replaced Correct pronoun usage
which had
to
luxury apartments. Change preposition
with
In addition
, there was be build a new motorway across the town
.
In 1950, one of the major features was that most of the houses were near the beach such
as hotels and a train station. in other words
, most area
on Change to a plural noun
areas
this
map was
fields across the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
town
. other
element on Change the wording
another
this
map was there had
a race course in the south of the Verb problem
was
town
.
On the other hand
, there were several changes in this
town
. Firstly
, in 1974, there was be built a new motorway across the town
. Moreover
, in 1964 there was be erect department store close to the highway. furthermore
, other important changes were between 1992 and 1998 which
there was plant a new water park Correct word choice
where
close
existing hotels and Replace the word
closed
removal
race Replace the word
removed
course
to Fix the agreement mistake
courses
changed
to luxury Add a missing verb
be changed
apartmets
.Correct your spelling
apartments
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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