The maps below show the main changes which took place on the town of Seaton between 1950 and 2000

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These two diagrams detail the layout of the

town

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in Seaton and the development between 1950 and 2000.

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, the most significant change was the area of the race course which

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close to the beach,

had

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which had

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been replaced

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with

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luxury apartments.

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, there was be build a new motorway across the

town

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. In 1950, one of the major features was that most of the houses were near the beach

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as hotels and a train station.

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, most

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this

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map

was

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fields across the

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other

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element on

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map was there

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a race course in the south of the

town

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, there were several changes in

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town

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, in 1974, there was be built a new motorway across the

town

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, in 1964 there was be erect department store close to the highway.

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, other important changes were between 1992 and 1998

which

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where

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there was plant a new water park

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closed

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existing hotels and

removal

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removed

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race

course

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courses

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changed

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be changed

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to luxury

apartmets

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apartments

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

174 words

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

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