The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the sets of life stages of

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and shows information about the three types of

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.

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, there are three main life

process

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, starting with

egg

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the egg

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and

end

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up with adult

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. From the diagram, it can clearly be seen that

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have two habitats to live which are

river

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and sea.

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, the whole life cycle of

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requires a minimum of almost 10 years to grow. In terms of the first habitat, the adult

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laid their eggs around the reeds and under the stones in

upper

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the upper

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river

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for approximately 5-6 months. The

river

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where the eggs

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were places

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places

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was a

slow moving

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river

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.

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, once the

egss

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eggs

become fry salmons with the size of 3-8 cm, they will live in a

fast moving

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river

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or lower

river

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for around 4 years.

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, the fry

turn

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into smolt salmons with a bigger size

for

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about 12-15 cm and

migrate

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migrates

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to the open sea for around 5 years. There, they will grow into adult

salmon

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and next back to the

river

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to spawn.