The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the sets of life stages of
salmon
and shows information about the three types of salmon
.
Overall
, there are three main life process
, starting with Fix the agreement mistake
processes
egg
and Add an article
the egg
end
up with adult Wrong verb form
ending
salmon
. From the diagram, it can clearly be seen that salmon
have two habitats to live which are river
and sea. Moreover
, the whole life cycle of salmon
requires a minimum of almost 10 years to grow.
In terms of the first habitat, the adult salmon
laid their eggs around the reeds and under the stones in upper
Add an article
the upper
river
for approximately 5-6 months. The river
where the eggs Add a missing verb
were places
places
was a Replace the word
placed
slow moving
Add a hyphen
slow-moving
river
. Then
, once the egss
become fry salmons with the size of 3-8 cm, they will live in a Correct your spelling
eggs
fast moving
Add a hyphen
fast-moving
river
or lower river
for around 4 years. Furthermore
, the fry turn
into smolt salmons with a bigger size Change the verb form
turns
for
about 12-15 cm and Change preposition
of
migrate
to the open sea for around 5 years. There, they will grow into adult Correct subject-verb agreement
migrates
salmon
and next back to the river
to spawn.Submitted by mmmuuu on
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