The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the line graph is data pertaining to the variation in the cost of three different materials in the year 2014. The units were measured in per cent. In general, it can be observed that all three metals experienced an upward trend during the timeframe with the exception of
nickel
.
Additionally
, it should
also
be noted that
nickel
had the highest rate of change in price compared with the other two materials at
first,
however
, its position was replaced by
zinc
at the end
of the period. Examining the figures in more detail, it can be observed that in January 2014,
Nickel
held the highest point with exactly 6%,
then
its rate witnessed a significant decline throughout five months from 6% to -2% until reached the low of -3% before rising up again to 2% in
last
month. With regard to the remaining data, it can be seen that both copper and
zinc
had an increase in cost. Moving on to
zinc
, its percentage was recorded at roughly 1% at
first,
after that these figures fluctuated upward throughout the period previously reaching 2% where
zinc
replaced
nickel
and
becoming
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the metal with the highest changing rate. Meanwhile, from the first recorded data, copper started at the second highest point with 2%,
then
its number dipped gradually to merely under 0% prior to going up to 1% and remained at
this
number for 2 months between July and September,
finally
, copper
last
jumped up to approximately 2% on December.
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  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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