The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two plan views illustrate the school premises of Lynwich
college
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College
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in 2006 and today.
Overall
, new infrastructures have been built inside the
area
to provide
better
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a better
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studying environment for students. Other than that,
centralized
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a centralized
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road network provide ease of access
into
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to
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the various buildings which
lacks
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was lacking
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in the past. Looking into details, new bus stops
has
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have
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been constructed adjacent to the main road which occupy some land space of the school. The car park has been redesigned in
such
a way that some
area
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areas
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has
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have
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been allocated for bikes.
Moreover
,
centralized
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a centralized
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cafeteria is standing to serve all the people inside to buy their necessities. It is interesting to note that,
although
the
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apply
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college buildings 1 and 2 are
sill
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still
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there,
few
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a few
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trees in South West
area
of the land
has
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have
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been cut
inorder
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in order
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to shift the library to provide
acess
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access
from both of the school buildings. Now there is a sports
center
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centre
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erected in the
Northen
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northern
part of the
area
, in between the
play ground
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playground
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and the carpark to facilitate more pupils to engage in
sport
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activities.
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