The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two plan views illustrate the school premises of Lynwich
college
in 2006 and today.
Capitalize word
College
Overall
, new infrastructures have been built inside the Linking Words
area
to provide Use synonyms
better
studying environment for students. Other than that, Correct article usage
a better
centralized
road network provide ease of access Correct article usage
a centralized
into
the various buildings which Change preposition
to
lacks
in the past.
Looking into details, new bus stops Wrong verb form
was lacking
has
been constructed adjacent to the main road which occupy some land space of the school. The car park has been redesigned in Change the verb form
have
such
a way that some Linking Words
Use synonyms
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
has
been allocated for bikes. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Moreover
, Linking Words
centralized
cafeteria is standing to serve all the people inside to buy their necessities.
It is interesting to note that, Correct article usage
a centralized
although
Linking Words
the
college buildings 1 and 2 are Correct article usage
apply
sill
there, Correct your spelling
still
few
trees in South West Correct article usage
a few
area
of the land Use synonyms
has
been cut Correct subject-verb agreement
have
inorder
to shift the library to provide Correct your spelling
in order
acess
from both of the school buildings. Now there is a sports Correct your spelling
access
center
erected in the Change the spelling
centre
Northen
part of the Correct your spelling
northern
area
, in between the Use synonyms
play ground
and the carpark to facilitate more pupils to engage in Correct your spelling
playground
sport
activities.Change the noun form
sports
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 3 times.
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