The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two plan views illustrate the school premises of Lynwich

college

Capitalize word

College

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in 2006 and today.

Overall

, new infrastructures have been built inside the

area

to provide

better

Correct article usage

a better

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studying environment for students. Other than that,

centralized

Correct article usage

a centralized

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road network provide ease of access

into

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the various buildings which

lacks

Wrong verb form

was lacking

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in the past. Looking into details, new bus stops

has

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have

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been constructed adjacent to the main road which occupy some land space of the school. The car park has been redesigned in

such

a way that some

area

Fix the agreement mistake

areas

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has

Correct subject-verb agreement

have

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been allocated for bikes.

Moreover

centralized

Correct article usage

a centralized

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cafeteria is standing to serve all the people inside to buy their necessities. It is interesting to note that,

although

the

Correct article usage

apply

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college buildings 1 and 2 are

sill

Correct your spelling

still

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there,

few

Correct article usage

a few

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trees in South West

area

of the land

has

Correct subject-verb agreement

have

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been cut

inorder

Correct your spelling

in order

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to shift the library to provide

acess

Correct your spelling

access

from both of the school buildings. Now there is a sports

center

Change the spelling

centre

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erected in the

Northen

Correct your spelling

northern

part of the

area

, in between the

play ground

Correct your spelling

playground

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and the carpark to facilitate more pupils to engage in

sport

Change the noun form

sports

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activities.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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4 paragraphs

178 words

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Variety in linking words

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Varied vocabulary

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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