The charts below show the propotions of british, students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts provide information on: the percentage of British
student
at Fix the agreement mistake
students
university
in England who there can speak other languages Fix the agreement mistake
universities
in addition
to English between 2000 and 2010 .
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Overall
, there was an upward trend in Linking Words
spanish
only in 2000 Change the capitalization
Spanish
while
, there was a downward trend in four proportions ( German only , French only , no other language , Linking Words
two
other languages ) in 2010 .
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and two
According to
the charts, the highest Linking Words
categories
was in Spanish in the year 2000 which Fix the agreement mistake
category
they
increased to 35 in 2010 .Correct pronoun usage
apply
Than
, both German only and two other languages had Replace the word
Then
a
same Correct article usage
the
percant
reaching 10% in 2000 and 2010 . The Correct your spelling
per cent
another
language was reta grew 5 fold from 15% in 2000 to 20% in 2010 .Correct quantifier usage
other
Moreother
, the no other language was Correct your spelling
Moreover
drop
to 10 in 2010. Wrong verb form
dropped
By contrast
, the French only had a Linking Words
slowly
decline from 15% in 2000 to 10% in 2010 .Change the word
slow
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