The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram depicts the life
cycle
of salmon
, from fry
to smolt, and then
to adult salmon
. It's a continuous process where the salmon
perpetuate their species through spawning.
Beginning with the release of salmon
eggs into the slow-moving upper river near small stones and reeds, it takes approximately 5 to 6 months for the eggs to develop into fry
, the initial stage of the cycle
. During this
stage, the fry
measure
around 3 to 8 cm in length.
As they progress, the Fix the agreement mistake
measures
fry
move
to the fast-moving lower river. Within about 4 years, they transform into half-grown fish known as smolt, reaching a length of approximately 12 to 15 cm. Change the verb form
moves
Following
this
stage, the smolt migrate to the ocean where they spend the next 5 years maturing into adult salmon
. At this
point, the adult salmon
may be caught by fishermen, marking the conclusion of their life cycle
. However
, those that continue to grow eventually reach a length of around 70 to 76 cm and begin their journey back to freshwater to spawn.
This
completes one cycle
of the salmon
's life span, from larvae to spawn, perpetuating the species in an ongoing natural process.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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