The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The given table provides information on how many
students
Correct pronoun usage
who graduate
graduate
and postgraduate in Wrong verb form
graduated
UK
who did not apply Correct article usage
the UK
full - time
Correct your spelling
for full-time
job
did Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
after
leaving university in 2008.
Rephrase
so after
Overall
, further
study was the most students
for both genres, while
voluntary work was the least. Meanwhile, there was an
significant increase in the quantity of Change the article
a
graduate
students
, which was higher than the figure
for postgraduate students
.
The number
of graduate
students
in part-time work was 17,735, which was significantly higher than the figure
for postgraduate students
. While
the number
of postgraduate students
in voluntary was 345, which was the
lower than the Correct article usage
apply
figure
for graduate
students
.
There was a remarkable increase further
study in the Change preposition
in further
number
of graduate
students
, which was approximately 27,000 higher than the figure
for postgraduate students
. Besides
, the number
of graduate
students
in unemployment was 16,235, which was sixteen times higher than the figure
for postgraduate students
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