The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The two bar graphs illustrate the percentage of published
movie
and the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
movies
cinema
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ticket
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sales
for a decade from 1996 to 2006 in a country. The two bar graphs are categorized into four movie genres (Use synonyms
drama
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comedy
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fantasy
, and Use synonyms
romance
). Use synonyms
Overall
, more Linking Words
drama
and Use synonyms
comedy
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movies
were published than the other two genres. Use synonyms
This
is aligned with the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
cinema
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ticket
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sales
, as Use synonyms
drama
and Use synonyms
comedy
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movies
were more Use synonyms
favored
.
In 1996, Change the spelling
favoured
drama
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movies
were the most published (just above 25%), followed by Use synonyms
comedy
(20%), Use synonyms
fantasy
(12%), and Use synonyms
romance
(6%) Use synonyms
movies
respectively. Use synonyms
While
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drama
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movies
were the most published, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
ticket
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sales
showed a different situation. The highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
cinema
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ticket
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sales
was for Use synonyms
comedy
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movies
at 20%, followed by Use synonyms
drama
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movies
at just above 15% in the second position. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
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ticket
for Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
fantasy
and Use synonyms
romance
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movies
were sold in Use synonyms
very
small Correct article usage
a very
number
, below 5%. Use synonyms
Thus
, a huge gap of around 15% appeared.
After a decade, in 2006, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
movies
published increased to around 5 - 10%, except Use synonyms
romance
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movies
remained the same. The situation remained the same, with Use synonyms
drama
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movies
still in Use synonyms
the
first place (35%), followed respectively by Correct article usage
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comedy
(25%), Use synonyms
fantasy
(16%), and Use synonyms
romance
(6%) Use synonyms
movies
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
cinema
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ticket
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sales
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also
slightly rose to nearly 5%, except Linking Words
romance
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movies
slightly declined Use synonyms
around
3%. Change preposition
by around
Comedy
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movies
were still the most popular at 23% Use synonyms
while
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romance
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movies
became the least popular at only 2%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cinema, ticket, sales, drama, comedy, fantasy, romance, movies, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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