The bar chart gives information about the life expectancy in Japan, Korea, the United States, and Indonesia, and the table shows the change in life expectancy between 1953 and 2008.
The bar
chart
shows the number of
life expectancy of people born in 2008, namely :Correct quantifier usage
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Japan
,Change preposition
in Japan
Korea
,United
Correct article usage
the United
States
,Indonesia
.
Correct word choice
and Indonesia
Overall
, Indonesia and Korea
showed the highest rate during this
period, while
the United States
showed the lowest rate.
According to
the chart
, it can be seen in the bar chart
that
there has not been much change in 55 years. From 1953 to 2008, the highest index was +15.7, followed by Correct pronoun usage
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Korea
, +12.5. The bar chart
shows Indonesia 70
, Change preposition
at 70
Korea
80
, Japan Change preposition
at 80
82
, United Change preposition
at 82
States
78
. As for the period, Japan is +3.5, and the United Change preposition
at 78
States
is +3 in the lowest figure.Submitted by hamzayevasamina on
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