In many countries government are investing on new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening. Do you think this is an approciate use of government money?

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developing nations, where their economy might have been

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today.

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or high-tech to tackle

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can improve the quality of life of the natives in the

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been gradually developing as it has invested in

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for the improvement of the country. So, to offer the benefits for the countries, it is worth involving

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can be seen that the government should immediately

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modern-techs

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and advantages are worthwhile to be involved in the development of the country.