The maps below show the city layout of Brisbane between 1975 and the current day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates the layout of the city called Brisbane in 1975 and in modern times.
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there are no significant changes except new amenities Linking Words
such
as a pub, new apartments, a station and a comp.
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Firstly
, in 1975, there used to be a good amount of trees on every four sides, Linking Words
while
, a factory was located on the upper side near the city centre, Linking Words
in addition
both Linking Words
huge
shopping mall and the old cinema were constructed near the centre.
Correct article usage
a huge
Secondly
, in the current day, the old shopping centre remained unchanged through the years, meanwhile, some trees Linking Words
were
cut down. Wrong verb form
have been
Hence
, now next to the mall,flats had taken place. Linking Words
However
, the factory was replaced by the software company and the cinema Linking Words
changed
into Add a missing verb
was changed
the
pub. New facilities Correct article usage
a
such
as a football stadium and train station are right now located on the left side of the city.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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