The bar chart shows the percentages of the UK workforce in five major industries in 1841 and 2011. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart compares the percentage of
labors
Replace the word
labourers
by
five different industries in the UK between 1841 and 2011.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, while
most people, who lived in the UK, were interested in working in Wrong verb form
manufacturing
manufactures
in 1841, services industries had by far the greatest percentage of Replace the word
manufacturing
labor
force among all in the next one hundred and seventy years.
What stands out is that services, which were the second Change the spelling
labour
popular
workplace in the mid ninetieth century, became the most popular industry in the United Kingdom with a sharp growth from 33% in 1841 to 81% in 2011. Correct quantifier usage
most popular
By contrast
, it is clear that
manufacturing took the second place by
a 27% decrease in Change preposition
with
term
of the workforce.
Fix the agreement mistake
terms
On the other hand
, although
third
proportion of workers Add an article
the third
were
allocated to agriculture/fishing companies in 1841, they have lost their fame since the early 21st century and reached the percentage of energy/water industry in the same year, both with just one Change the verb form
was
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, construction experienced a negligible rise to 8%.Submitted by mohi.rezaiee on
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