The diagram below shows how the water cycle works
The provided process chart of the
water
cycle displays the steps of the water
cycle
Overall
, the cycle’s one step is that the underground water
gets together with
water
sources such
as lakes, rivers
and seas by flowing from porous rocks to non-porous rocks. After that, water
travels through
downhill by the force of the flow in Change preposition
apply
rivers
that leads it into the sea eventually. During the travel of the water
, an invisible evaporation takes place in lakes, rivers
and sea
in which the Fix the agreement mistake
seas
water
turns into a vapour afterwards. Wind pushes and cools them and forces the vapour to form bigger clouds by joins
clouds as the vapour. Wrong verb form
joining
Then
, wind
Correct article usage
the wind
continue
to cool and move the clouds making them cool enough to cause Change the verb form
continues
the
rain. Correct article usage
apply
Water
comes down in the form of rain
Correct your spelling
rainwater
water
. It either joins lakes, rivers
or Fix the agreement mistake
seas
sea
or slowly leaks inside the ground.Fix the agreement mistake
seas
Submitted by sonatakcaa on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, rivers with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼