The diagram below shows how the water cycle works

The provided process chart of the
water
cycle displays the steps of the
water
cycle
Overall
, the cycle’s one step is that the underground
water
gets
together with
water
sources
such
as lakes,
rivers
and seas by flowing from porous rocks to non-porous rocks. After that,
water
travels
through
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downhill by the force of the flow in
rivers
that leads it into the sea eventually. During the travel of the
water
, an invisible evaporation takes place in lakes,
rivers
and
sea
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in which the
water
turns into a vapour afterwards. Wind pushes and cools them and forces the vapour to form bigger clouds by
joins
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clouds as the vapour.
Then
,
wind
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the wind
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continue
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to cool and move the clouds making them cool enough to cause
the
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rain.
Water
comes down in the form of
rain
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water
. It either joins lakes,
rivers
or
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sea
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or slowly leaks inside the ground.
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