the chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United kingdom last year.
The bar graph below illustrates the rate of shopping online for various kinds of products and services in three different regions (
Australia
, Canada and the UK
) in the last
12 months.
In general, it can be clearly observed that the most purchased items were books. Meanwhile, the lowest percentage was recorded in online financial services.
To begin
with, around 40% of consumers enjoyed music in Australia
and Canada. However
, in the UK
it was 20% more. In addition
, approximately 45% of netizens bought their IT tools online in the first two mentioned regions. The UK
, on the other hand
, reached nearly half of the total consumers for this
item. Similarly
, around the same amount of people bought books through the web except for British people who exceeded the rate by 60%.
Meanwhile, the next categories were the three least purchased items last
year. Toys sales in Australia
was
almost nonexistent, compared to less than 20% of that in Canada and Britain. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, Canadians rarely ordered food online, in contrast
to almost one-fifth of all consumers in Australia
and The UK
. Finally
, online financial service was hardly ever used by British citizens. On the contrary
, around 15-17% of Australians and Canadians who used the serviceSubmitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, uk with synonyms.
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