The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Average distances in miles per person per year, by mode of travel. Write 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
travelers
in the United Kingdom between 1985 and 2000. The general overview here is that over the period, In 2000, there was a significant increase from 4,740 to 6,475 miles.
Change the spelling
travellers
According to
the data, In 1985, in total 4,740
, it was essential to first note that the proportion most popular Change preposition
of 4,740
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
car
, other, local Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bus
, Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
, walking, Fix the agreement mistake
trains
bicycle
, long stand Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
bus
, and Fix the agreement mistake
buses
taxi
at 3,119,450,429,289,255,54,51, and 13, nautical miles, respectively.
Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
Furthermore
, in 2000, in total 6,475, the ratio of the travel group peak was a car, Other, train, Local bus
, walking, and long-distance bus
, Taxi and bicycle around 4,860,585,366,237,124,42, and 41 furlongs, respectively.Submitted by chalermchartbsc on
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