The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and2040 in three different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the proportion of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in
Japan
, Use synonyms
Sweden
and the Use synonyms
USA
.
It’s clear that the percentage of elderly people in these countries is expected to increase to almost 25% of the respective population in 2040.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in 1940, the population of people aged 65 and over stood at 9% in the Use synonyms
USA
, around 7% in Use synonyms
Sweden
and just 5% in Use synonyms
Japan
; Use synonyms
however
, when the figure for the Western countries experienced a steady increase to around 15% in 1985. Linking Words
Japan
saw the opposite trend, sliding to about 3% in 1985.
Use synonyms
Although
the percentage of Linking Words
Japan
was consistently lower than that of Use synonyms
Sweden
and the Use synonyms
USA
, Use synonyms
this
is expected to increase significantly, reaching 25% in 2030. It is overtaking Linking Words
Sweden
to become the highest. Meanwhile, even though Use synonyms
Sweden
and the Use synonyms
USA
fluctuated over 80 years, Use synonyms
overall
, showing an upward trend and are expected to continue, reaching about 25% in 2040.Linking Words
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