The Following chart show five different industries percentage share of France's economy in 2000, 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relvant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The Following chart show five different industries percentage share of France's economy in 2000, 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relvant.

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The bar chart illustrates the contribution of five different industry sectors (Finance, Food Processing, Manufacturing, Tourism, Oil, coal and gas) to France's economy over three decades.

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, It can be seen that the finance industry has been the largest contributor

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over the other four industries and it is forecasted that it will remain one by the end of the year 2029. The finance sector was at its peak in 2009 at 30% followed by

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and Oil, coal and gas sectors contributed equally to the economy at around 25%. Manufacturing was

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the lowest was Food processing which accounted for 10%.

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, Manufacturing was the lowest earning industry

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for 5%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

113 words

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The Following chart show five different industries percentage share of France's economy in 2000, 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relvant.

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