The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the pie chart and line graph is information pertaining to the UK's
crime
information last
year.
Overall
, it can be seen that people aged 12 and 18 committed the most criminal activities compared to others. Additionally
, crime
related to violence was the dominant type of crime
in the UK while
the opposite was seen in public order crime
.
Beginning with the chart, it can be observed that the 0-8 age group committed no crime
. The crime
rate increased by 5% among people aged 12 before seeing a surge to 80% and reached its peak by 12-to-20-year-old individuals. After an increasing trend, the criminal rate then
witnessed a drop to exactly 20% for people aged 20-28. This
was followed by a slight decrease to around 5% and 20% by 20-60-year-old persons. The 64 age group had no data for this
.
Turning to the type of crime
, violent crime
dominated with 46%, below that was property crime
and drug crime
with 23% and 22%, respectively. With regards to public order crime
, it is the least type of crime
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