The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the amounts of energy in the USA from 1980 to 2012, and predictions for 2030.
Overall
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Petrol
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and
Oil
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were consistently keeping an upward trend as the dominant fuel in a 32-year period.
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, their consumption is expected to continue to increase, reaching 50 quadrillion units. In 1980, the consumption of nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower almost had the same quantity (less than 5q), stood at the
last
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levels of energy.
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the amount of
petrol
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and
oil
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in the USA was 35q, ranking the first place. Coal and natural gas stayed in the middle with 20p and 16p respectively. Over a period of 32 years, until 2012,
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hydropower experienced a slight decrease, the other energy consumption all had an upward trend.
Petrol
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and
oil
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reached 40q, coal and natural gas were both around 23q. As for projections, the amounts of natural gas and hydropower will remain stable, but coal,
petrol
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and
oil
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will continue to have a significant rise to 30q and 50q respectively. A slightly upward trend will be seen in the nuclear and solar/wind from 2025 to 2030.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol, oil, q with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depicts
  • trend
  • consumption
  • projections
  • slow growth
  • advancements
  • efficiency
  • acceleration
  • underscoring
  • expanding economy
  • household demands
  • trajectory
  • technological advancements
  • population growth
  • standards of living
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • sustainable energy policies
  • environmental impacts
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