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Your ordered product online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. Write a letter

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dear.
manajer
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manager
i
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I
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 am writing
this
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latter
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letter
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 regarding
product
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the product
a product
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 you
sand
Verb problem
sent
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 to me is wrong , i
hope
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 your
company
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 will
can
Verb problem
take
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 responsibility
about
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for
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this
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 situation . my name is
jonatan
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Jonatan
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am from
zimbabue
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Zimbabwe
 my address
24
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is 24
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streat quenn
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Streat Quenn
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. no
package
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 222442 .
i
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I
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 make note
about
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that
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you
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your
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company
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 is wrong
sand
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and
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 me
package
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i
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I
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 wait just 3
month
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months
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long time for wait i always
hope
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package
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the package
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 speed come home but the reality
so
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is so
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 different .
i
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I
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hope
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 your
company
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 can
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be responsibility
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responsible
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responsibility
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responsible
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for
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about
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for
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the
teh
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the
 situation
i
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I
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 need you
gat
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to gat
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 the
package
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to
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in
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to
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 my home and change
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it again
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again
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it again
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 if
i
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I
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Wrong verb form
do
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donen't
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done
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do
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 have time
for waiting
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to wait
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, you must
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be responsibility
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responsible
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responsibility
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responsible
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,
i
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I
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want
wana
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want
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go
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to go
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 out of town
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for 2
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2
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for 2
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week
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weeks
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 for
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now
naw
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now
. because
i
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I
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 can go to working
however
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i
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I
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done
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did
have done
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 nite you reason again if you done
reaspon
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reason
 my note
i
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I
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 can report
you
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your
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company
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in
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to
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police
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the police
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 , you have
trow
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throw
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 away my time for waiting and wrong
pacage
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package
 we
hope
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 you can settle
matter
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the matter
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 to your satisfaction regards customers
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grammar
Ensure accurate spelling and grammar usage to improve clarity.
structure
Organize your letter with clear paragraphs for each main point to improve structure.
content
You've included key details such as your name, address, and order number, which is good for clarity.
content
The purpose of your letter is clear as you have expressed the main issue and what you expect the company to do.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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